What do YOU guys think of my halo 3 montage video? (Its our first video!)?

[Firecracker]

me and my friends made this. i hope u guys enjoy it, me and my friends are 13. it took about 2 weeks to make this. we dont think its that great but we want to ask what you guys think about it! Any suggestions on how to make it better? plz try 2 enjoy it also as u watch i

Heres the link. www.youtube.com/watch?v=VcOZi_zt0qM

 

[skater9119]

not bad but try and pick the best ones and use more transitions between each part
if you starting to put to much videos it feels clustered