Are my halo 3 machinima skills up to scratch?

[Matt]

im a fan of making machinima and i wanted to ask people what they think of mine. my youtube user name is "Mattycap1"
comment here and on my page for feedback and ideas

 

[D R U M S ™]

I think you need alot of work.

Try adding a little bit of story to your videos, just you recording yourself getting killed repeatedly isn't enough.

Sorry.